http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/feed/? Latest topics Tue, 22 Dec 2009 09:15:29 GMT 10 http://illiweb.com/fa/revaz-blue/logo.gif http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/feed/? http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-council-of-wyrms-invasion-of-the-dragon-isles-t63.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain NAME: (Dragon names tend to be either descriptive of the habitat and breath and hide of the dragon, or to be on the longish side, with around four syllables. A Blue Dragon might be called Erosion, Skybolt, Azure, or Khellendros). SPECIES: (I'll post a list of the dragon species after this. Dragons can mate with others outside their particular species, but their offspring are either one species or the other) ART: (Dragons raised by the Council are expected to learn and study different paths... ... Fandom-based Tue, 22 Dec 2009 09:15:29 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-council-of-wyrms-invasion-of-the-dragon-isles-t63.htm#227 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-council-of-wyrms-invasion-of-the-dragon-isles-t63.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/divine-right-gods-in-america-t57.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Whether man made gods, or gods made man, they have always been with us. However, North America is not very good soil for gods to grow. While demons, vampires, werewolves, gremlins, witches, wizards, giants, dragons, ghouls, ghosts, elves, fairies, and the like have all made their way here, only the strongest gods can manifest on American soil for any length of time... and with the other creatures here, we increasingly need divine guidance and protection. So the very strongest gods of each pantheon ... Non-fandom Mon, 12 Jan 2009 01:17:51 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/divine-right-gods-in-america-t57.htm#205 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/divine-right-gods-in-america-t57.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/the-mystere-immortal-pirate-adventure-on-the-high-seas-t62.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain The Mystère is an elegant, beautiful frigate-style sailing ship made of black wood decorated with ivory, gold, silver, ruby, sapphire, diamond, emerald, pearl, coral and amethyst in intricate designs and arcane sigils and veves. Its milky white sails are woven of pure silk, but it they hardly ever tear, even in pitched battle. Its elaborately carved figurehead changes depending on who is currently acting as captain, from a lifelike mermaid to a coiling serpent, to a fierce lion to a looming spider. ... Non-fandom Mon, 19 Oct 2009 06:34:06 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/the-mystere-immortal-pirate-adventure-on-the-high-seas-t62.htm#224 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/the-mystere-immortal-pirate-adventure-on-the-high-seas-t62.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/scion-hero-demigod-god-t61.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain THE STORY: At first, when there was nothing but chaos, the Titans gathered, absorbing like energies and expelling that which was different from them. In the havoc, some tried to give birth to new forms of themselves, but these children, the Gods, were more advanced and had greater identity than their parents. The gods could also make alliances, and they fought and turned back the Titans, binding their parents in a prison that was supposed to last forever. The titans' other brood, collectively ... Fandom-based Mon, 19 Oct 2009 05:17:28 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/scion-hero-demigod-god-t61.htm#221 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/scion-hero-demigod-god-t61.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/anime-manga-and-tv-f10/my-twisted-sense-of-reality-a-xxxholic-fanfic-t60.htm WeirdPerson My Twisted Sense of Reality xxxHolic fanfic Watanuki/Doumeki “Because everybody but Watanuki knows” “This is it!” Watanuki thought as he marched toward school. “This is the day I tell Himawari I like her! And that damn Doumeki isn’t going to get in the way!” He thought angrily, clenching his fist. “Hey Watanuki!” Himawari called, walking up to him at his locker. “Himawari!” Watanuki cried, his voice jumping up a couple of octaves as he said her name. “How are you today?” “Fine.” ... Anime, Manga, and TV Fri, 27 Mar 2009 07:19:09 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/anime-manga-and-tv-f10/my-twisted-sense-of-reality-a-xxxholic-fanfic-t60.htm#220 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/anime-manga-and-tv-f10/my-twisted-sense-of-reality-a-xxxholic-fanfic-t60.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/novels-novella-and-plays-f6/the-rainbow-league-t41.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Dramatis Personae Skyrocket / Rob: Curly Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, Italian American, Slim and Tall, T.A. Education Major and Surfer. (Telekinetic control of speed and direction and distance, superfast, kinetic energy only, air fields) (Salt) Polar / Lars: Short, buzzed White Hair, Blue Eyes, Goatee Circle Beard, Nordic, Huge and bear-like, Architect/Construction (Resistant to cold, claws, strength, resilience, senses) (Great Heat) Sunburn / Jesse: Spikey Blond Hair, Blue Eyes, Farm Boy, ... Novels, Novella, and Plays Fri, 03 Oct 2008 08:56:11 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/novels-novella-and-plays-f6/the-rainbow-league-t41.htm#149 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/novels-novella-and-plays-f6/the-rainbow-league-t41.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-imperial-colleges-of-magic-t59.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Long ago, the Old Ones emerged from a gate in the North Pole. Their vast resources of magic and technology were intricate and powerful, allowing them to cross worlds, create life, and command gods and daemons. They took an interest in the creatures of this world, and began training and changing them. Their first students were the Lizardmen, reptilian, amphibian and saurian creatures living in the land of Lustria (roughly Mexico, Central, and South America). These savage creatures were the first ... Fandom-based Thu, 22 Jan 2009 09:06:36 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-imperial-colleges-of-magic-t59.htm#217 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-imperial-colleges-of-magic-t59.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/the-nine-runeworlds-norse-mythology-at-its-best-t58.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain In the beginning there were three things... Ginungagap, the endless void; Muspelheim, the primordial fire; and Niflheim, the Primordial Ice. As the flames of Muspelheim melted the ice of Niflheim, and the ice doused the flames, the two mixed together in Ginungagap to form the first beings: Ymir, father of the giants, and Aumdumla, the primordial cow whose power brought forth the first gods. The Gods defeated Ymir, and drowned most of his brood in the Ginungagap, and used Ymir's body to build ... Non-fandom Thu, 22 Jan 2009 05:35:11 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/the-nine-runeworlds-norse-mythology-at-its-best-t58.htm#213 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/the-nine-runeworlds-norse-mythology-at-its-best-t58.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/grimm-trapped-in-a-world-of-twisted-fairy-tales-t56.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Once upon a time there was a land of fairy tales. Where dreams and nightmares walked hand in hand, where wonder and despair were two sides of the same coin, where magic and imagination ruled, and where kindly villagers lived next door to strange beasts. These are the Grimm Lands, where you - a clever kid from the Real World - find yourself trapped. You might start out as a bully, a nerd, a jock, or an outcast... but you could become much, much more. Maybe even a hero. To survive, ... Fandom-based Tue, 23 Dec 2008 07:41:39 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/grimm-trapped-in-a-world-of-twisted-fairy-tales-t56.htm#198 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/grimm-trapped-in-a-world-of-twisted-fairy-tales-t56.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/demon-the-fallen-t53.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain History, as the saying goes, is written by the victors. Whether an uprising is seen as a glorious rebellion or a treacherous insurrection depends entirely on who held the upper hand in the end, with the loser consigned to posterity as traitors, tyrants, and worse. Their story is largely forgotten. We are told that demons are the incarnations of evil, spirits who exist to seduce the innocent and lure the virtuous to destruction. They are driven by a relentless hate of all things holy, consumed ... Fandom-based Thu, 04 Dec 2008 08:17:13 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/demon-the-fallen-t53.htm#179 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/demon-the-fallen-t53.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/short-stories-f5/the-little-girl-and-the-three-stray-cats-t55.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain (This is a joint effort between AriEmeraldstar and myself. Ever space between lines marks a different author.) Once upon a time... in a faraway magical land... there lived a little girl in a little house ... with her mother and father and three stray cats , all of whom she loved very much. The cat's names were Larry, Curly, and Mo. (sigh... you had to do that, didn't you) , though Larry looked more like a "Mittens", Curly was the most uncurly ... Short Stories Tue, 23 Dec 2008 06:54:58 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/short-stories-f5/the-little-girl-and-the-three-stray-cats-t55.htm#197 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/short-stories-f5/the-little-girl-and-the-three-stray-cats-t55.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/wildguard-the-made-for-reality-tv-superhero-team-t19.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Welcome to Wildguard! In a world where you can't throw a car without hitting at least four people in costumes with powers, it is hard to make it big and become famous. The Ultra Mega Super Five (who haven't had just five members since the seventies) are the world's premier superhero team. Powerplay is a super-powered Boy Band. And last season's Wildguard was a rousing success, led and produced by Four: Superhero, Supermodel, with four distinct powers (Mist form, laser blasts from hands, metallic ... Non-fandom Fri, 15 Feb 2008 17:09:47 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/wildguard-the-made-for-reality-tv-superhero-team-t19.htm#42 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/wildguard-the-made-for-reality-tv-superhero-team-t19.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/anime-manga-and-tv-f10/beastess-snippet-t54.htm WeirdPerson A/n: So hi! i'm not dead. Just trapped in a writer's block. I wrote this an like 1am after watching Justice League and Batman on youtube. Backstory: It's kinda self explanatory. Beastess is my DC OC (heh that rhymes). She is kind of a slut, but that's mostly because she is immortal, and has guy issuses. Through some event, she ends up being adopted by Bruce Wayne (I'm thinking this is after Dick but before Tim [for those that follow the bat-verse]). She is all purple (hair eyes, skin ect), ... Anime, Manga, and TV Fri, 19 Dec 2008 03:45:39 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/anime-manga-and-tv-f10/beastess-snippet-t54.htm#190 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/anime-manga-and-tv-f10/beastess-snippet-t54.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/defenders-of-gotham-t37.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Batman is gone. He has protected the city for years, against any number of villains, but now he is gone. And the city needs a protector. Or protectors. So Oracle, also known as Barbara Gordon, daughter of Police Commissioner Gordon and former Batgirl, has used her computer networks and connections throughout the city to reach some unlikely heroes, all from her wheelchair. But these young "heroes" know Gotham's crime very well indeed, for each of them is the child of one of Batman's ... Fandom-based Wed, 01 Oct 2008 08:37:09 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/defenders-of-gotham-t37.htm#143 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/defenders-of-gotham-t37.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/drops-of-jupiter-soy-latte-t52.htm AriEmeraldstar Keep in mind that this piece was written to be performed, not read. I still like it, though -- it's what I'll be performing for my Spoken Word final on Friday. Enjoy. Drops of Jupiter, soy latte Meet Virginia, smokes a pack a day Oh wait, hold on, that’s me The music is flowing in I’m caught up in the tide Carrying Eddying Swirling Racing I never want to leave Warm depth Low Soothing Frigid heights High Screeching I love it The rhythm The current I ... Poetry and Lyrics Thu, 04 Dec 2008 07:26:45 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/drops-of-jupiter-soy-latte-t52.htm#178 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/drops-of-jupiter-soy-latte-t52.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/mummy-the-resurrection-t47.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Over the course of thousands of years, ancient Egyptians perfected the art of preserving the bodies of the dead. Their intent was to maintain the body for the family of the deceased. After death, the individual's soul passed into Duat, the Egyptian Underworld. There, in the spirit city of Amenti, Osiris ruled over the dead. The god Anubis guided new arrivals before the judges of the afterlife, so that they could determine the spirit's reward for its life. When incorporated with the mummification ... Fandom-based Tue, 28 Oct 2008 06:38:40 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/mummy-the-resurrection-t47.htm#158 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/mummy-the-resurrection-t47.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/fireborn-return-of-the-dawn-t21.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain In a forgotten age, before recorded History, mankind did not live as cavemen in ignorance and squalor, as we have been led to believe. They built great cities, civilzations, and cultures long before the rise of Mesopotamia and Egypt. The Empire of Atlantis spread across what would be Europe and mastering the arts of metallurgy and magic. In that Mythic Age, humanity was not alone in the world, and his power dwarfed in the shadow of the elusive forest-dwelling Fae and the colossal storm-and-mountain-born ... Fandom-based Sat, 16 Feb 2008 22:10:58 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/fireborn-return-of-the-dawn-t21.htm#46 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/fireborn-return-of-the-dawn-t21.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/words-t51.htm AriEmeraldstar Words... What are these... I want to talk I want to scream Afraid Of what will happen Words, words, Meaningless words! They are my voice, My soul, What good are mere words? Sharper than swords I... One such as I Cannot wield a sword Like words... But why? If others can use them Why can't I? And if I try What then? What now? Why shouldn't I Be able to use them I'm just as good as them Smarter Just as good So why shouldn't I? Poetry and Lyrics Mon, 24 Nov 2008 06:06:18 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/words-t51.htm#164 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/words-t51.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/friendship-t50.htm dnite Moving closer to impending doom Guilt and greed moves us on, We fled but face the evening dawn Quivering and racing towards our death Asking for forgiveness, we try our best Such grief and sadness we hold in our hearts We shall always be apart in mind Hate and curses that controlled us Shall make our souls, forever bound Last two we jest until one falls But end up that we both don’t stand at all Two hearts competing, two friends now rivals A fate not as cruel as the ... Poetry and Lyrics Fri, 14 Nov 2008 07:01:58 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/friendship-t50.htm#163 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/friendship-t50.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/perspective-t49.htm Rho981 Walk down the hallway lined with doors Nameless doors, faceless doors, colored with the blandest shade of reason. Walk, down the hallway, past the walls lined with photos landscape photos, those Hateful photos, surrounded by thick white barriers And the edge of darkness they call frames. Tiny, framed, spiteful wishes of freedom, Disgustingly, Futile. Walk to the window at the end of the hall To find no glass or object there Just, Empty, the precipice ... Poetry and Lyrics Sun, 09 Nov 2008 07:58:44 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/perspective-t49.htm#161 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/perspective-t49.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/ghostwalk-t44.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Welcome to the City of Manifest! Built on ancient ruins that guard the entrance to the land of the dead, this mystical place has some unique qualities, first and foremost among them being that the city is full of ghosts --- spirits that have traveled to the land of the dead's border but are not yet ready to leave behind their former lives. In most parts of the world, ghosts are incorporeal and unable to affect the people and things around them, and many are carried along in the currents of the ... Fandom-based Sun, 19 Oct 2008 07:04:11 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/ghostwalk-t44.htm#154 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/ghostwalk-t44.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/essays-and-school-work-f11/pirates-pearls-and-profit-an-english-essay-t48.htm AriEmeraldstar This is a rough draft of an essay I have to write for my English class, about how archetypal and mythic patterns, particularly a retelling of the hero's journey, explain the success of a film -- in this case, it's Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl. I also need to discuss what aspects of our society or cultural evolution this film appeals to, as well as show if it deviates from the universal forms (discussed in an essay in our textbook) and explain the significance if it ... Essays and School Work Thu, 30 Oct 2008 09:05:34 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/essays-and-school-work-f11/pirates-pearls-and-profit-an-english-essay-t48.htm#159 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/essays-and-school-work-f11/pirates-pearls-and-profit-an-english-essay-t48.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/sanguine-vampires-through-the-ages-t46.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Vampires walk among us to this very day, and have done so since the ages of myth wound to a close. Every child learns the story of the first vampire, perhaps before he or she is taught to walk. Who is it, you ask? Cain, son of Adam and Eve and the first murderer? Lilith, first human rebel against God? Count Dracula? Kingu? The hindu goddess, Kali? The monstrous Libyan queen Lamia, cursed by the gods and transformed into a wormlike beast? No... none of these, actually. The first Vampire's story ... Non-fandom Wed, 22 Oct 2008 05:55:24 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/sanguine-vampires-through-the-ages-t46.htm#156 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/sanguine-vampires-through-the-ages-t46.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/my-surrender-t45.htm psychicpixy44 Hold my hand and lets take the step off the edge Here you purge yourself of misery and disgrace I feel your hopelessness at my fingertips And it's why i have led you to this dreadful place You've confessed your life is a reckless mistake So please listen when i admit mine is too I feel the breath of suicide at my neck That's when i realize that I'm just like you An imposter, a fake, and a horrible mess I cry in the dark and now I'm screaming your name I'm over pretending ... Poetry and Lyrics Mon, 20 Oct 2008 20:38:49 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/my-surrender-t45.htm#155 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/my-surrender-t45.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/x-men-decimation-t36.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain M-Day was a day like any other. You went to work. Went to school. Went on dates. Talked with family. Traveled. Saved the world. Threatened the world. Everything. You were a mutant, one of the special ones, and people said that at the rate things were going, normal humans would have faded away and EVERYONE would be a mutant. And you had a head start on them. You had powers. You looked different from everyone else. You had an extra gene. You could fly. Play with fire without getting burned. Dive ... Fandom-based Wed, 01 Oct 2008 08:18:20 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/x-men-decimation-t36.htm#142 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/x-men-decimation-t36.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-rise-of-the-superiors-a-retake-on-an-original-team-t43.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Humanity is changing, evolving, becoming something greater. Already, humans with superpowers, known in common parlance as "Superiors," have been born. There were a few who cropped up in the Cold War with unreliable powers, but only in recent years have there been those born with superpowers that were both functional and devastating. Recognizing a need for training, strong leadership, and solace for these emerging superiors, Dr. Andrea/Andrew Zephanias, a noted psychologist, surgeon, ... Fandom-based Fri, 17 Oct 2008 16:04:00 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-rise-of-the-superiors-a-retake-on-an-original-team-t43.htm#152 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/fandom-based-f17/the-rise-of-the-superiors-a-retake-on-an-original-team-t43.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/mary-wollenstonecraft-godwin-shelley-u-mad-science-ed-t42.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Welcome to Mary Wollenstonecraft Godwin Shelley University, home to the greatest (and scariest, and most unhinged) scientific minds in the world! Here the best, brightest, and most explosive all come to study, research, invent, explore and redefine the laws of reality. Each member of the university is a Spark, gifted with a sort of natural talent that enables them to gain a spark of inspiration for inventing or designing theories. This is usually accompanied by a great deal of rapid experimentation ... Non-fandom Fri, 17 Oct 2008 15:17:14 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/mary-wollenstonecraft-godwin-shelley-u-mad-science-ed-t42.htm#151 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/mary-wollenstonecraft-godwin-shelley-u-mad-science-ed-t42.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/joyraptorsunrestrained-s-poems-t23.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain A Tribute to a Valiant Knight The lord strode from his grand throne room And left his favorite chair, To confront the dragon of doom Within its dark and filthy lair. The dragon, it was vicious; a fierce and deadly brute. The Burnished Knight it planned to slay, for thrill and for loot. The Knight was a brave and noble lord, A scholar, statesman, and skilled with sword, Strong of body, mind and heart, past the dragon’s claws he’d dart. Out the ... Poetry and Lyrics Sun, 16 Mar 2008 05:50:53 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/joyraptorsunrestrained-s-poems-t23.htm#81 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/joyraptorsunrestrained-s-poems-t23.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/reminisce-with-me-t40.htm AriEmeraldstar Quite possibly the most random bit of writing I've ever done. You've been warned. Reminisce with me So much has changed Consciousness flows away like water The inspired goon Finding a cure for life The killer is safe With the paparazzi Energy is home The gear of time is sweet Like candy, and always welcome In it's deluxe gold wrapping That caused the extinction Of Halifa -- Poetry and Lyrics Fri, 03 Oct 2008 03:09:23 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/reminisce-with-me-t40.htm#147 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/poetry-and-lyrics-f8/reminisce-with-me-t40.htm http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/dynamites-t39.htm Joy&RaptorsUnrestrain Flight. Superstrength. Laser vision. Shapeshifting. Telepathy. Blizzard breath. Electricity control. Regeneration. Sonic shout. Phasing. You know the powers, right? Everyone does. They belong to Wonder City's greatest hero, Captain Dynamo, right? Well... not anymore. Captain Dynamo's body was found in a hotel bed a month ago... undressed and with poisoned lipstick on his lips. The killer has thus far eluded authorities, though that hardly matters, because with Captain Dynamo one, all of his foes ... Non-fandom Wed, 01 Oct 2008 15:36:23 GMT http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/dynamites-t39.htm#146 http://criticscorner.getdiscussion.com/non-fandom-f18/dynamites-t39.htm